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I think that what makes this portion (i've read the whole posting) so effective is that you do not just care about what you are writing, you have a true author's ear for the language. I felt total confidence in your ability when i read 'long streak of unwashed spittle' and realised that you weren't going to take me into a world of futuristic cliches. Then in the horrific dissection scene you write a completely beautiful sentence: steam mushroomed from the chest cavity and drifted lazily through the pool of light.' The contrast between what you were saying and how you were saying it did so much to heighten the effect." ~ JAK